Commenting rp (6)

"Are you alright?" I wonder aloud when I realized the room had gone so quiet, you could hear a pin drop.

she not alright i tell u she needs her axel, she wanna kiss him, he not making a move, so she just make him jealous staring and flirting with the window

lol u realize now the room's quiet

"Huh? Yeah, why?"

cause u staring at a window girl

i mean

sign of nervous embarrassed awkward girl

u not alright

"I dunno," I sigh and shrug. "I guess my brother bites his lip when he's anxious so I was just curious."

i bite my lip when i got nothing to do

ooooh so IT WAS THAT ooh i would've never got that, like srsly u good how did u ever guess that?

"just thinking about life"

ye ehm

no one

like no one

(that i know of)

says that out loud

btw she lying

she thinking about

AXEEEEEEEEL

I sigh. "Thinking about life can be a good thing, just don't overthink it."

NOW THATS

A GOOD ADVICE

I just nod.

ye cause she not listening to josie oh no she thinkin 'bout axel

(How deep)

ye it is truly the most TRAGICAL romance rp i have ever read *fake tears*

(Um... I think it's time for the dramatic entrance of a NEW character, lol...)

yes! brilliant idea!

dramatic entrance tho

ye that would be cool

do me a favor

if he boy

u make him very dramatic

if she a girl

u make her very dramatic

ik its lots of information to keep in mind

actually

u know what

i'll make another oc too

and i'll show her to u

dont bother with me saying "her" immediately

i do not know how boys work

and im kinda feminist and stuff

not my fault

its not like i wanna be a feminist

i just am

kind of

believe me i have nothing against boys

almost

so imma just do a girl

for the boys' sake

i show her to u

u guys approve or not

if u do

one of u guys will play her

lol

(Just pretending that this whole conversation happened while people were still boarding...)

lmao

Ethel walked through the train, looking for a compartment to sit in. She found one that looked fine. "Hi, can I sit here?" she asked.

HA U GOT GUTS GIRL

be like "hey uhm random people, ye, u guys there, u mind if i sit here?" *they open their mouths to say sm* "ok thx"

"I don't mind! The more the merrier, am I right?" I smile and pat the seat beside me.

she be like DONT MIND AT ALL SIT HERE BESIDE ME

ME NOT WEIRD TRUST ME

I DONT TALK MUCH

I DONT INTERRUPT AWKWARD MOMENTS

NOPE

ME GOOD AND 100% NORMAL

"Yeah, I agree." I give them a warm smile. "Name?"

she be like "oh ye i dont mind but first gimme ur name bitch or i'll beat ur ass and btw, axel is mine so dont come near him understood?"

ok no that was harsh

(so like Axel is just on the opposite side of Edith and just saying nothing while all this happens)

YAY KNEW IT

THEY'RE OPPOSITE EACH OTHER

I make another attempt at conversation. "Uhh... Do you play quidditch?"

classic hp small talk

srsly thats the best u've got edith

"We know how to play but we have too many....extracurricular activities to join the school teams," Axel says, "Too bad though, we'd make excellent players."

u got too many extra powers too u knew that right

"we'd make excellent players."

he's a show off isnt he

oh no

he not that kinda boy is he

he not that confident show off rule breaker that brags a lot right

oh no

pls no

(my opinion:) THESE KIND OF GUYS SUCK I MEAN THEY IMPERTINENT AND THINK THEY CAN BOSS AROUND EVERYBODY LIKE SRSLY BRO U THINK U CAN MESS WITH MOI U WRONG DUDE U GONNA REGRET THAT FOR THE REST OF UR IDIOTIC MISERABLE LIFE CAUSE IM GONNA RUIN U MAN

cmon we all got that kinda guy at school

but alas

i still ship him with edith

the nerdy one

*edith glares*

oh sorry i meant the blonde nerdy one

*edith rolls eyes*

"Makes sense. I might try out this year, mostly just for fun but I probably won't make it."

for fun

srsly

quidditch isnt a game

its serious business

u can die

NOPE DUMBLEDORE I KNOW JUST LIKE 2 PEOPLE HAVE DIED DURING QUIDDITCH GAMES BUT NO EXCUSES

it is very dangerous

u up to the challenge

i thought not

dont worry

i wouldnt be either

"I'm sure you would, if you put in a good enough effort," Axel smiles and they lock eyes.

NOT ALL ABOUT GOOD EFFORT AXEL

u gotta have talent

u gotta have it in u blood

TF THEY LOCK EYES

WOW

THIS IS GETTING INTERESTING

YEP SPICE IT UP A LITTLE BIT MORE PLS

(hehe i cant wait for @Baby Niffler to comment on this)

u better lol

me reading that first time:

awwwww thxxx *thinking about no one in real life remembering about the little short girl in the room*

@Laylani Malfoy I can literally hear her singing kiss the girl from the little mermaid

why didnt i think about that

hey soph

josie's the loud awkward one right

make her sing that when edith and axel our having a deep conversation when they're alone and tehey're-

WAIT

IM GONNA POST HOW I IMAGINE THAT MOMENT

"Thank you?" He just stares at me, like he's trying to stare into the depths of my soul or something. (Hehe yeah)

ok now THAT was a decent answer

u gotta be sassy with the guy

without being mean

ye dont be sassy mean like i am

me ruining all the possibilities of befriending a guy

ye u know

he stares

careful close u legs

if u wearing a skirt XD

my mom told me that her mom always told her that lmao

He looks away, an awkward smile on his face. He looks out the window. I stare at him disgustedly and roll my eyes.

AXEL LIKES THE WINDOW TOO DOESNT HE

U BOTH CHEATERS

U WANNA MAKING EACH OTHER JEALOUS ARENT U

WELL GUESS WHAT

SINCE THE FLIRTING BETWEEN U TWO IS PRETTY OBVIOUS

U JUST GOTTA DO THE KISS PART

EEEEEEASY

he got awkward

uh huh

me enjoying him feeling awkward

he not that confident after all huh

U ALL GOT A WEAKNESS

I just kind of look down at my shoes and don't say anything.

just kiss him already

dont stare at u shoes

they boring

when there's someone RIGHT IN FRONT OF U CLEARLY HOLDING UP AN INVISIBLE POSTER SAYING FREE KISSES FOR EDITH who is much more interesting then u shoes

The train stops at Hogwarts. Home sweet home. "Finally." I sigh. I grab my luggage and get off the train quickly.

so u can meet axel behind the wall and snog a bit here and there

"I'll see you at the feast??" I ask, smiling at me new acquaintances, which I hoped would turn into friends. "I have to find my brother, he'll be pissed if I don't let him know I'm okay."

"new acquaintances"

srsly

like ur brand new future bf

"I hoped would turn into friends"

maybe one of ur new "acquaintances" is available to be sm more than *cough cough* "friends"

*hint to the acquaintance named aXeL*

"Yeah, I'll see you there!" I give her and the others a quick wave before running off.

before running off to the secret hide-out-snogging-place-behind-wall so u can later smooch axel

- SOPHIE <3

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