hi guys!! it's claire :) so i'm writing this story for a short story competition in my school, and i REALLY need some feedback. it's not related to harry potter, but i'll put the link below. please respond to this post with feedback, thanks!!
Justice: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MU_eKKBW-p8h5HSfZNPQjgoTSEDk8oY8D1qTCRlhm4M/edit
idk why i cant open it :(((( ill try again!!