I’m so sorry 💔 take as much time as you need xx

Good luck! I left some comments and suggestions. Basically, it's great but I'd love some more detail in the scenes. At the moment, it's a bit passive - eg: 'I went to the shops and bought some eggs'. What would be more interesting would be something that shows the reader what happened. For example: The shop was crowded when I went in, full of adults--mostly parents--trying to control their toddlers. I stepped around a harrassed-looking man in a suit and picked up a basket, then began to shop. Where were the eggs? Looking around, I moved towards the aisle at the far end, the one full of flour crates. Hopefully, what I was looking for would be in the 'dry ingrediants' section. My mum always complained about the layout of the shop, but I found it easy to navigate--at least, if you knew what you were doing. ...etc. I'm not going to write out the whole thing because I'll bore the pants off you XD But hopefully you get what I mean. Adding detail just makes the scenes easier to imagine and more emotional. Hope that helps and let me know if you'd like any clarifications ~ Lacy

Sounds amazing!

Wow, congrats!!

@BananaJewels I guess they meant HPFF?? That was confusing for me as well. Maybe we won’t be able to find the site’s web address any more

@BananaJewels I’ve been reading through some of the comments from past hpff members and they seem to be suggesting that they didn’t. Then, when the site was rebooted, all the fics were restored so there was never any need to

Also, this is where the fics will be posted: https://archiveofourown.org/collections/hpfanfiction_hpff

This is mine too — MISSLACYBEE And also my current works: 1) First Impressions (The Marauders) James Potter arrives at Hogwarts full of confidence, only to find that things are less easy than he expected. The girl of his dreams hates him, one of his best friends keeps disappearing and the Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher is acting so oddly that James starts to suspect something strange is about to happen. With enemies on his tail and pranks up his sleeve, James Potter's first year at Hogwarts turns out to be one that he's never going to forget. And, luckily for him, he has a whole six more of them to go. 2) Second Guesses (The Marauders) After a chaotic start to their second year, the Marauders return to Hogwarts for another round of mayhem... with a list of new pranks up their sleeves. James is determined to get Lily's attention this year, Remus harbours a secret that threatens to ruin his friendship, and Sirius struggles to come to terms with a brother who's in Slytherin. As for Peter, he's sick to death of all the madness. Why can't everything be normal for a change? Or as normal as things can get with werewolves, wizards and vampires around, anyway. 3) Music in Midsummer Katherine Winslow never meant to spill wine all over music-hating Lord Thomas at her mother's midsummer ball. Nor did she mean to kiss his quiet little brother behind the fountain that same evening. After a disastrous entrance into society, Katherine's clumsiness lands her in a situation she cannot escape. Lord Thomas has invited her to his house, and suddenly she is surrounded by mystery. His Lordship is secretive and strange, but our heroine believes she can uncover the truth about his past. Will Katherine succeed? And will she find her place in this world of music and mystery? Hope you enjoy reading! Feel free to get in touch if you are around on Wattpad - I’d love to hear from you :)

I was reading some more of 'Casting Moonshadows' by Moonsign yesterday and it made me happy. So here's the link to that: LINK

You could always try writing on other websites :) Wattpad has a great community

me too ♥

^ other five :) I didn’t know this was here And I agree about HPFF. I’m not in the hangouts and I only check in here once or twice a month. I’m very active on Wattpad, but I still miss the website loads ❤️

I did ...sort of, anyway. I gave up the HP fandom and I still intend to avoid JKR's work, but I decided that finished my fics wasn't going to do me any harm. Nice to hear from you! 💖

Haha, idk if I know you either, but nice to meet you if I don't ♥ Hope you enjoy reading them if you decide to take a look!

Thank you! I have a much better updating schedule now XD It's great to hear from you too!

@Laylani Malfoy I'm doing great, thanks :) Still got a couple of school days, but then it's almost CHRISTMAS

I‘d allow the apology and try to see things from their point of view, but the trust would always have cracks in it. It also depends on what the person did - for example, pushing someone into a road is different to accidentally tripping them

Thank you :) Take care of yourself too!

Thank you! I hope you'll stay amazing too xx

Thank you so much, I'm tearing up now 🥰